Caligula's Launderette

I do think I was having issues with verb tense. Gah! Makes me think my brain was being purposefully militant. Thanks for pointing all those things out, hon. Who knows ...

Thank you, kayles, for the review. This was written as a flash fiction piece for my creative writing class, we had to write about something in third person. Though, the ...

Thank you all for your reviews. :D Jigster > About the aunt. Alfreda Devereux as a character screams pink, but also reminds me of Professor Trelawney from HP. In Chapter ...

Haha, just downloaded the whole thing and listened to it at once... and I suddenly realize that we have entirely different versions of the Tower That Ate People . Gabriels ...

Here is the last part. Ta, Cal.

O M G, look who finally uploaded. :D You know the drill. Ta, Cal.

You know I'll get to this eventually. *wink* *wink* *double wink* Basically on a first-read-run-through I ditto Jack. My, now, wasn't that totally unhelpful ... I think. Chowder, Cal.

Ganked it for a critique. :D Cheers, Cal.

Hey hon, Here is just the first eight pages of Chapter Three . Enjoy, Cal.

Glad I could help. :D I do have the first two parts of Chapter 3 done. Just printed out the last of 3, as well as all of 4, 5, ...

Niel Gaiman. *snuggles*

Thank you, ma dear. I heart Margo too, a girl after my own heart. She is more like me than any other character I have every written. Cal.

Hugs, Sam! The Captain dipped his head in a sort of salute. “You are in my cabin, ma’am, aboard the Atlantia, the fastest ship in the Spanish Main.” Okay, so ...

Hey Lynds, Thanks for the loverly comments et al, yeah this is a early draft: go here for something more recent. Plus, there are more chapters posted. :D Thanks, Cal.

Thanks, Shadow. There is another Fool's Duel entry before this that involves Michael, I don't think you need to read it before you read this, though: Lygarde de Mayne . ...